In the nightclub...

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tunes
music
surrounds us
in the nightclub
songs


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Write an instant Lantern (shape) poem here...


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5 comments:

Luis Portugal said...

Hello
It has a nice blog.
Sorry not write more, but my English is bad writing.
A hug from my country, Portugal

February 7, 2009 at 9:39 AM
christian soldier said...

horse
head up
eyes rolling
ready to bolt
beautiful

OK-I cheated a little on the last line...
Will work on it..:-)
C-CS

February 8, 2009 at 6:31 PM
Captain USpace said...

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Thank you Luis Portugal!
*BIG HUGS* back from America!

C-CS - Great Lantern, almost, just make the last line a one syllable noun, another word for line one;
'ride' works, that can also be a noun.

horse
head up
eyes rolling
ready to bolt
ride

Excellent!

:)

February 8, 2009 at 11:11 PM
christian soldier said...

USpace-I like it-ride-
Will write a few more 'lanterns' this week :-)
C-CS

February 9, 2009 at 9:32 AM
Captain USpace said...

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Thanks C-CS, 'friend' and 'steed' would also work. For the real 'Lantern look' they should be centered, otherwise it looks like just one side of a Japanese Lantern.

:)

February 9, 2009 at 7:20 PM

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