Make A Wish...

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star
falling
through the sky
meteorite
rock


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Write an instant Lantern (shape) poem here...


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5 comments:

christian soldier said...

I'll be back--headed for class--Will work on the lantern while there
C-Cs

April 18, 2009 at 8:39 AM
christian soldier said...

Horse
Rolling
In the dirt
He must be bathed
Again!
C-CS

April 18, 2009 at 11:30 PM
Captain USpace said...

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Thanks C-CS, cool image, I like it; but that last line should be another one syllable noun that can mean here the same as 'horse'. I can think of a few.

:)

April 22, 2009 at 3:07 PM
christian soldier said...

How about -GROAN !?
OR?? :-) D_ _ _ !

April 24, 2009 at 9:26 PM
Captain USpace said...

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Yes, but, like it says at the link:
"Line 5: synonym for noun in line one (one syllable)"

A 'groan' can be a noun, but not another one for a 'horse'.

How about 'steed', 'ride, 'friend', ???...

Cool!

:)

April 27, 2009 at 5:03 PM

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